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Pained Love

I never noticed you
I don’t know why
You seem so perfect
It makes me cry

I found you by mistake
A glitch in my life
Little did I know
You were an emotional knife

You don’t know how I feel
I hide it well
For the dance of love
Is a living hell

My heart’s broken open
You cut like a blade
Get me out of this blazing sun
I really need the shade

Barbed wire
Never cut so deep
Why do I bother
With the secrets I keep

I can’t stay away
The yearning’s too strong
When I’m around you
I know it’s where I belong

How do you do this to me
Never felt like this before
There’s just something about you
I need more and more

Blood pouring from my heart
Try to clean the stain
Too bad it’s permanent
Just like the pain
©2006-2009 ~quarab58
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Author's Comments

Hmm, this is an old poem. I dug it up on my computer. Probably from last year or the year before. They're all so depressinggg

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:iconhellsingripvanwinkle:
There's a person I know that this would apply to regarding my life and I love how you potrayed it so well.

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:iconsammi66:
I like this.... I don't know what else to say... I like it :)

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:iconquarab58:
I have that problem a lot =)

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-Sarah-

"I grip the wheel and all at once I realize:
(And you're getting away...)
My life has become a boring pop song
And everyone's singing along."
- "I'm Ready" by Jack's Mannequin
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:iconx-suicidal-beauty-x:
Wow.
That Is Amazing.
I Can Really Relate That To That.
Thankyou
x

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HadoukenWhore.

OhYes.

HurtMe..I'mAlreadyBroken.

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:iconquarab58:
Thank /you/

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-Sarah-

"I grip the wheel and all at once I realize:
(And you're getting away...)
My life has become a boring pop song
And everyone's singing along."
- "I'm Ready" by Jack's Mannequin
:heart:
:iconkylia1992:
That is deep... I like it... I think many ppl are able to relate to it.... Kinda makes me think of my ex.... He ruined a lot of things for me and now I'm still healing from it all.... Love in pain, pain in love. Sometimes in harmony, sometimes just not...

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